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“Fairy Tale”

There were once four girls/fairies named Priscilla, Pixie La-La, and Po. Well since I have known them thats what they have been called. They lived in a heavily populated area where most fairies like them lived. Each one of the fairies lived with their mom, dad, brother, and sister. The fairies were good friends because each one of them had a magical power that no one else in their family had. Priscilla had the type of power to become invisible. La-La and Po had the power to mute objects and people, and Pixy had a power that was undetermined by everyone. La-La and Po’s power were not as powerful as Pixie and Priscilla because they had not finished fairy school yet. So therefore La-La and Po had to complete school to be considered an advanced fairy. In this imaginary land, they did not consider Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday, and Sunday days of the week, They were considered the months. There were only seven months in the imaginary place. The days of the week were considered A-day, B-day, C-day, D-day,E-day, F-day, and G-day. Each day had a special meaning behind them. It was early A-day morning when La-La came to meet Po at the “wish a day fountain” where they usually go before they are off to school. After La-La and Po made their wish they were off to school. They were both disgusting how they stayed up so late to practice for their big test so they can become an advance fairy. Po said that one of the tricks that she needed to know, was going to hold her back from passing the test. La-La knew exactly what to do and taught it to her right before she went in for her test. When Po was finished, she had to wait for the La-La to take her test to get the results. The fairies were both finally finished and the Lady came out and said that they had both passed the test and that they were both advanced fairies. The new advanced fairies ran home and showed the parents and other two friends that they were officially advanced fairies. Both the families and friend were jumping for joy and proud of the two daughters. The girls were very happy and lived happily ever after.

The End

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you? I like the plot. It is original and I think that it would make a good fairy tale.
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2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? The problems don't add a lot of suspense but if it was a fairy tale then it wouldn't have to have a lot of suspense.

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? The characters are likable but I think you could discribe them a little bit more.

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? Maybe you could discribe the place were they live a lttle bit more.

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? There are a few spelling mistakes.

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) No it wasn't ariginal, but interesting.
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2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? Iliked it as a start but I would continued it futher.

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? I liked the imaginry charaters, very weird. If it was a book I recon my sister would read it.

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? Yes. 5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? About the charaters, what they look like.

By:Brianna Fleming and Nicole Rueda