frezcoldman

Grade:7 Best Vacation:i dont like vacations Birth Month:april Career Goals: Favorite Band(s):guns and roses Favorite Candy:gum Favorite Food:poutin Favorite Munchie:chips Favorite Soda:rootbeer Favorite Subject:math Hobbies/Sports:baseball football Pet Peeve: Pets:1 cat 1dog Siblings:2 brothers and 1 sister Other things you should know about me..

one day when i was going to pick up some pizza from the store and cook it for supper so i was walking to the store and i finally got there got the pizza and took a short cut down a alley and i seen a shiny moving object i heard something come from behind me so i ran as fast as i could down the alley ans made it home my mom told me to go back to get more because all of the family is coming over tonight so i went back down the alley ans seen it again i walked up to it then it all of no where i seen it vanish in front of me so i started going faster then my fastest

Saint Michael School
1. On the level of story-telling: if you were the King (or the aliens), would you allow this story-teller to live another day? If no,why not? No, the story has many grammatical errors and is not long enough

2. Be specific, try not to merely write, " this was good", instead explain what was good about it and why. The plot and story idea is good because it is very descriptive

3. Nominate "Hall of Fame" stories.