LMS+Group+6



1. Ilina 2. Jane 3. Karen 4. Kelly 5. Nicolle


 * Grade:** 6th
 * Best Vacation:** New York, Hawaii, Florida, Taiwan, Japan
 * Birth Month:** September, July, August, July, January
 * Career Goals:** Athlete, Artist, Athlete, Pro Dancer, Vet
 * Favorite Band(s):** Maroon 5, none, flow! :], Any band, Maroon 5
 * Favorite Candy:** pixie sticks, cotton candy, wonka products, NONE (it makes you fat), Hi-Chew
 * Favorite Food:** sushi, spaghetti, chinese food!!, anything that's not too fat, chicken
 * Favorite Munchie:** pie, Italian ice-cream, anything, fat-free/low fat cookies, mochi
 * Favorite Soda:** combo of all sodas, coke, fanta (orange soda), pepsi (or diet pepsi), sprite
 * Favorite Subject:** PF,art/math/science/PF/choir/social studies/language arts, PF!!, PF, Choir, and Math, PF
 * Hobbies/Sports:** soccer, swimming, soccer, football, and basketball, DANCE, basketball
 * Pet Peeve:** mom, little bro, dogie doo doo, bugs/insects excluding the pretty ones, dad
 * Pets:** rat, dog/fish/bird, fishiessss, fish/white kittens, DOGS
 * Siblings:** half bro, sis/bro, 1 sister and 1 brother, BRO-THER, half bro
 * Other things you should know about us...**


 * Ilina:** taught my rats to do tricks <3 soccer, I'M A GIRL
 * Jane:** blaah blaah blaah? <3 swimming, I'M A GIRL
 * Karen:** <3 soccer and basketball. especially playing with friends.I'M A GIRL?
 * Kelly:** love shooting STARS (though I've never seen one...get it STAR?) <3 dance/basketball, I'M A GIRL...I THINK, <3 to run, <3 shopping
 * Nicolle:** loves playing with my dog, <3 basketball, I'M A GIRL


 * STOWY TWIME!!! (Story time)**


 * Topic**: An entertainment to stall the alien king from destroying us all.


 * Characters**: Alien King: Balooa
 * Victims**: Alictoom, Viliniwashoopie, Spinula, Baboosh
 * Nararator**: Winkum


 * Setting**: On the planet Koopie

crispy-honey covered anteater tongue. This will be the most festive celebration since we captured the Jupiter citizens.
 * Beginning**:
 * King** **Balooa**: My fellow aliens! We will have a party for capturing these long-armed amphibian-squashes! We will prepare to roast them with


 * Alien** **Citizens**: Yes, our king is right. The amphibian-squashes should be roasted for intruding our land of the most famous planet, Koopie.


 * Alictoom**: Before you roast us, don't you want to hear our stories from Earth? It may be of use to you later on in time.


 * Baboosh**: Uh-huh! Exactly!!! :P.


 * King** **Balooa**: (in a squeaky voice) Well, that will be the only request of yours granted before you die in our hands. Carry on.


 * Viliniwashoopie**: Oy!Oy! Then let us begin!!!!!!!!!!!!


 * Baboosh**: uh-huh! EXACTLY!!!! :P


 * Spinula**: A long time ago, oh, there was a so-called manly teacher, who happened to be named Mr. Puke. He happened to be an evil man, and every day, he planned a new plot to kill the students of PILC by throwing them into the dungeon of boredom. But the students were so smart, that they never fell for it. One day, a very chillaxing day, Mr. Puke announced to his evil minion, a very cunning idea to kill the students of PILC with tons of homework.


 * Viliniwashoopie:** No, no you got it ALL wrong! It was like this. Mr. Puke here, secretly put vanilla scented poisonous jelly beans that he gave to the PILC students. However, one very PILC nosy student had a strong nose and he smelt the poison before it could do any harm.


 * Baboosh:** YEAH!...uh no. I know the story better than anyone. I'm Baboosh for god's sake! I just hear and see things. Mr. Puke had an incredible collection of Barbie Dolls. One day, he decided to activate his minions of Barbie dolls to kill the students of PILC. He decided to kill them because they were smarter than him and he doesn't like to be out smarted. Mr. Puke set the Barbie Dolls out, and quickly escaped from the room. As the Barbie dolls attacked the students, the children of PILC wiped the Barbies out by using their mad Kung-Fu skills. When he came back, only one Barbie was left, his favorite one, named Gabriella (he had a crush on her since he was 3). He yelled "NOOOOOOOO NOT HER!" But of course the flaring PILC students decided to finish her off. Mr. Puke was so depressed that he quit his job, moved to Alaska and lived with the polar bears to keep warm.


 * King Balooa:** How fascinating! We shall go to Alaska and visit Mr. Puke. Such an evil mahn we must kill him.


 * Spinula:** If you drop us off at Alaska with your space shuttle, we will promise to bring Mr. Puke back by sunset.


 * King Balooa:** Ok, but bring him back alive.


 * Spinula:** No duh!


 * King Balooa:** Chop chop! I want to cut his head off.


 * Spinula:** Thank you, your majesty. Bye.


 * Winkum:** The four mischievous kids came to the freezing cold Alaska. Of course they did not know Mr. Puke...he was just part of their imagination and they could not bring him out of their imagination and hand him over to the king, could they? So they decided the easiest decision would be to bring King Balooa a imposter, just as bad as Mr. Puke. They all thought of the exact same thing because there was only one evil man from their home town Kingston, California. His name was Mr. Ballin'!!

While Alictoom, Viliniwashoopie, Spinula, Baboosh were on the search for Mr.Ballin', they went through many obstacles. At last! just an hour before sundown, they noticed Mr. Ballin' in the bar, fist fighting with our imaginary Mr. Puke. They couldn't belive it. So, all four of them rushed into the bar, grabbed Mr. Puke by his arm, and dragged him out without a word.


 * Alictoom:** Wow!! I can't believe my eyes! You guys look over there! It's the guy from our imagination! It's Mr. Puke!


 * Spinula:** Let's go inside and see if Mr. Puke is willing to save Earth from destruction.


 * Washoopie:** Well, we have no choice. Let's go guys.


 * Baboosh:** "*cough cough* Mr. Puke! Mr. Puke! Come with us to King Balooa's space shuttle, and prevent the world from destruction!"


 * Mr. Puke:** "Slow down you ignorant youngsters. My PILC students are waiting for me, i mustn't stay any longer."


 * Mr. Ballin' :** Woah woah woah...slow down here kids, I'm not finished here with Pukster. We have some unfinished business.


 * Alictoom, Spinula, Washoopie, Baboosh:** BUT IT'S AN EMERGENCY! WITHOUT MR. PUKE, ALL OF US WILL DIE HERE, INCLUDING YOU.YOU MUST RECONSIDER. PLEASE DO! MR. BALLIN', ONCE WE REPORT MR. PUKE TO KING BALOOA, WE WILL INSTANTLY RETURN HIM TO YOU, TO FINISH YOUR UN FINISHED BUSINESS.


 * Mr. Ballin' :** Sure thing kids. Be back before dark!

Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?)

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement?