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Grade:6 Best Vacation: calgary Birth Month: febuary Career Goals: social worker Favorite Band(s):rolling stones,ac/dc Favorite Candy: gum Favorite Food: ribs Favorite Munchie:salt and vinger Favorite Soda: pepsi Favorite Subject: science Hobbies/Sports: drawing Pet Peeve: nothing Pets: 3cats Siblings:3sisters,5brothers. Other things you should know about me... Iam a girl

Mouse And Rabbit

Mouse and Rabbit were on a adventure to find food for there house because it was going to be winter right away.They had to work quickly to find food but every thing was all most gone. They were the last ones to find food for there family. All they found was an apple, a pear, and a carrot. Mother was very mad when they walked through the door way into the living room. All i here is  blablabla you boys are locked in your rooms for three days until you get me some more food but they ran away and never came back and went to the forest far beyond the forest and lived there for weeks and weeks and never came out of the forest till they saw a greenover sized dragon i the forest how tolled them to get get out of my forest but they stayed and stayed till he was super mad and ran up at them and then rabbit and mouse relized he wasent all that and all big and strong he was just like us so mouse and rabbit left to go home they new mother was mad she probely dident even care that rabbit and mouse were gone well there ok thats all thats to it then mouse said in a tiny voice well no time for talking mouse what rabbit said to mouse.time to get back on the road agian mouse to get home and see are grompy mom oh no rabbit said well singing on the way there.by time they they got there mom dident care she had food and on the side a boy friend to take care of her ya right mouse said thats a good friend of hers isent it how could she get a man looking like that allthe time.

Saint Michael School
1. On the level of story-telling: if you were the King (or the aliens), would you allow this story-teller to live another day? If no,why not?

2. Be specific, try not to merely write, " this was good", instead explain what was good about it and why.

3. Nominate "Hall of Fame" stories.