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Grade:7 Best Vacation: then i went to winnpig with my family Birth Month: march Career Goals: teacher Favorite Band(s): sean kingston,mike jones, avirl Favorite Candy: baby bottle pop Favorite Food: pizza Favorite Munchie: chips Favorite Soda: ice tea Favorite Subject: gym, art Hobbies/Sports: basketball, vollyball Pet Peeve: Pets: i have 2 dogs and 3 cats Siblings : 1 brother

Ghost Story One night me and clarissa wew walking to meat martina in the woods and we saw somthing that was pink & blue and it was big. Martina went to see it and then she got eated by the pink & blue bogeyman house. And told Martina mom that she got eated by something that was pink & blue and we think that it is a bogeyman .But Martina mom did not bellive us then she said go home we said ok then we went to clariss house and we told her mom that martina got eaten by a pink & blue thing and that we think it a bogeyman. Then we went to my house and told my om that martina got eaten by somthing that was pink & blue and we thing it is a bogey man and m mom came and see and we sae martina body and mae and clarissa stared crying then we went home. So it was a bogeyman

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 * SMS GROUP 12**

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?)

**have you finished writing the story yet ?**
2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement?  . Jessica HA The plot is original

2. There is a lot of suspence but i think it should be a bit longer! 3. The characters are cool! But they should talk a bit more. 4. They do!

5. The start of your story you could saywhere the woods are maybe!

Saint Michael School
1. On the level of story-telling: if you were the King (or the aliens), would you allow this story-teller to live another day? If no,why not?

Yes because the story was good, but it might be better if it was a little longer.

2. Be specific, try not to merely write, " this was good", instead explain what was good about it and why.

The story was creative with the characters, especially the blue and pink bogeyman and it was really interesting!

3. Nominate "Hall of Fame" stories.

