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===Grade:6 Best Vacation: to drumheller Birth Month: october Career Goals: veteranary Favorite Band(s):none Favorite Candy: gum Favorite Food: spaghetti with cheese on top Favorite Munchie: chips Favorite Soda: cream soda Favorite Subject: math even though im not really good at it Hobbies/Sports: my favourite sport is hockey or basket-ball Pets:2dogs 3cats 5 fish Siblings:8 Other things you should know about me...===

__Tiktala becoming a polar bear__
===Tiktala went to the spirit and said I want to be a polar bear because their beautiful,tough,majestic and much much more cooler than anything else.So spirit took her to the ice and all of a suden__BAM__ she was there and she felt so good then there was another polar bear and the Tiktala said "what are you doing here" and th polar bear said "im the polar bear and the spirit said that you think your all that" and then Tiktala screamed and said "you can talk" of course what did you think I talk gibberish or something "ahh! your not supposed to talk" well your a polar bear to so we can talk to each other ah don't even think about it Tiktala your hurting my ears and now you can't talk to humans cause your a polar bear yes I can watch ok if you say so your going to scare them away but if you think you can do it go ahead buy if you scare them away well theyre feeding me Tiktala I'll be mad at you for a long time and possibly not forgive you fine i wont but now that I cant talk to human's I can't talk to my mom,grandma,grandpa,and most of all my poor lonely dad...===

Jayden HA 1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?)

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? u could use some more similes

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? i thoght that Tiktala story was a complucated one

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see // and //hear // and //experience // the story? yes i thoght it was very.... relaxing

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? ur similes

Saint Michael School
1. On the level of story-telling: if you were the King (or the aliens), would you allow this story-teller to live another day? If no,why not? I would let them live another day because the story was interesting 2. Be specific, try not to merely write, " this was good", instead explain what was good about it and why. I would hope it was in a book store.. that's how good it was 3. Nominate "Hall of Fame" stories. Yes.

