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=Responses=

LMS Group 9
1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) We think that the plot could have used a little more excitement.

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? Nothing was there to be satisfied about, you could have had a little more imagination.

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? Yes, the characters are very lifelike.

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? Yes, but this story needed more adjectives.

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? This story needs to be more exciting.