HA-Cameron

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·  Put up the camping stuff then go get the fishing gear and the boat. ·  The things I have to setup are the tent, beds, fire, freezer ,clothes, fishing gear and boat. ·  Erect the tent. ·  I find the rope and pegs for the cloth line ·  Make the fire using a steel bar. Hammer 2 Y pegs to the ground so the steel bar rests between the Y pegs. ·  Get some rocks to border the fire so it doesn’t escape. ·  Hang a small chain on the steel bar so a pot can hang on the bar to cook. ·  Get a small generator to run the freezer. ·  Plug an extension cord in the generator and the other end in the freezer. ·  Pull the choke on the generator to get it started. ·  Get the fishing rod and canoe. ·  Go down to the river or stream ·  Put the canoe into the water. ·  Make sure you have the paddles and the fishing gear in the canoe. ·  Jump into the canoe and go fishing
 * My Story on CAMPING**
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. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?)

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement?

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) The plot was alright.

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? There isnt really a problem or climax.

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? No characters written in, but I was imagining the person setting up all the difrent camping things.

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you see and hear and experience the story? Yes they help you see how to set up a campsite.

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? It needs to be more detailed and worked on a little more.

1. Punctuation, grammar, word choice. I thought it was mediocre but it was workin for it.

1. On the level of story-telling: if you were the King (or the aliens), would you allow this story-teller to live another day? If no,why not? No, because it was more of a list than a story.

2. Be specific, try not to merely write, " this was good", instead explain what was good about it and why. What ya couldve done is written a story on a person setting up a camp instead of just listing what to do.

3. Nominate "Hall of Fame" stories. ...