HA-Lachie

Grade:7 Best Vacation: robe Birth Month:october Career Goals: hunter Favorite Band(s):clash Favorite Candy: twix Favorite Food: ribs Favorite Munchie: All munchies Favorite Soda: pepsi Favorite Subject: phys ed Hobbies/Sports: almost all Pet Peeve: When People cheat to get done Pets: 3.ferrets/15.duks/15.chooks/9.dogs/10.fish Siblings:1 Other things you should know about me...love hunting

My Ferrets

Bob that Burow any good year mate its pretty dug out grab the nets bob yep. Nets are set put the ferrets doun then ouch it bit me go doun the hole hay ed what do you want to drink solo same. Jump ed theirs a snake it went doun the hole there’s a rabbit make that two. the ferrets ill get the spade its only sand there they are grab them ed got them lets go to the next warren the old cruiser isn’t going that well pull over theirs a cupel of rabbits sitting they went doun a hole in bens ed you got your phone on you yep im ringing now. Hi Ben ed hire can I have a ferret on yore north paddock year mate okay by good work all ready got 5 and gutted were are the ferrets there still doun the hole. That will do 10 rabbits is good for a long time. Lets go it’s a long trip back to home what the pub yep bob drop the guts out out of the rabbits. Back at home put the rabbits in the chillier pared up.

. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?)

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement?

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1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?)

The plot line was original but I really didn’t understand any of it.

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

I hade no interest in the story.

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? Your character weren’t life like at all they where really plan.

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you // see // and // hear // and // experience // the story? There was no imagery in this story.

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement? All