HA-Belinda

Hi my name is Belinda Grade:6 Best Holiday:Gold Coast Birth Month:Febuary Caree Goals:To Become A Arkutect Favourite Band(s):Mika Favorite Singer(s): Delta Goodrem & P!nk Favourite Munchie: Cabury Choclate Bars Favourite Food: Chocolate Favourite main Meal: Tuna Casarole Favorite Soft Drink:Creamy Soader Favourite Subject:Sport Favourite Sport:Badminton Favourite Hobbie:Working On My Families Farm Pets: 5 kittens, a farm full of sheep, a flock of goats and I'm getting a puppy!! Sibblings:a little brother and two older sisters
 * About Me**

**Taylor's new Freind**
“Hey dad, how come you weren’t home at 2?” I Asked. “Well I took poor old mr.franasta to hospital, I found him unconscious on his drive way”. I ran from the house jumping over the rickety fence and to her dad who was getting out of his bright yellow car. I hated mr.franasta. I wished that her dad had left him there to die. Suddenly a van zoomed past sending dust in every direction possible and screeching to a stop in front of the grand homestead next door. There is a great water hole at the back of the house in witch two older brothers go swimming in every summer while my annoying little sister stays at home in the heat, serves her right for blaming every thing on me. The only good thing about her is that she helps do my chores, I thank her for that. Mum gives the all clear to go and see what’s happening. I sprinted to the newly painted gate to find that 6 or 7 bold men dressed in black are filing out of the van and finely followed by a another man in a suit carrying a beautiful but very pale girl in a white frilly dress. I ran to the man squeezing through the gate getting paint on my jeans which are already covered in mud. Sneaking up behind the strange man I clench my fists and get ready to punch, release my fist powers through the air and hits the man squarely in the back of the head making him fall to the ground with a soft crash. The girl straightens up and before I can say anything she starts to yell, I stand rooted to the spot not sure if I’m surprised or scared. To Be Continued

Chickeepoo 1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?) yes its original 2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed? Its good how it is 3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions? yes 4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story? its pretty good 5. What areas of the story need the most improvement?

Saint Michael School
1. On the level of story-telling: if you were the King (or the aliens), would you allow this story-teller to live another day? If no,why not?

2. Be specific, try not to merely write, " this was good", instead explain what was good about it and why.

3. Nominate "Hall of Fame" stories.