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Names: Siddharth, Edward, Nikhil, and Sanchit Grade: All: 6th grade Best Vacation: Siddharth: Florida Trip to 3 Disney Parks, Edward: Great America, Nikhil: Florida trip to Disney World and Everglades, Sanchit: India Birth Month: Siddharth: December, Edward: June, Nikhil: May, Sanchit: July Career Goals: Siddharth: Professional Chef, Edward: Professional Dentist, Nikhil: Professional Doctor, Astronaut, Engineer, Sanchit: Professional technologist Favorite Band(s): Siddharth: Soulja Boy, Edward: None, Nikhil: None, Sanchit: Linkin park and 50 cent Favorite Candy: Siddharth: Snickers and Twix, Edward: None, Nikhil: Tootsie Rolls, Twix, Laffy Taffy, Snickers, Milky Way, Gum, and Lollipops, Sanchit: dairy milk Hersheys, Gum, and Starburst Favorite Food: Siddharth: veggie lovers pizza, Edward: Pizza, Nikhil: Veggie Pizza, Indian Food, Pasta, and Ravioli, Sanchit: Hard taco from Taco bell and cinnamon twist Favorite Munchie: Siddharth: Cheddar Cheese Chips, Edward: Doritos, Nikhil: Cheese Sticks, Sanchit: Donut Favorite Soda: Siddharth: mix of Pepsi, Coca-Cola, Fanta, Mountain Dew, and Root beer, Edward: Baja Blast, Nikhil: Mix of Pepsi, Fanta, Sprite, Coke, Lemonade, pink lemonade, and mountain Dew, Sanchit: slurpee Favorite Subject: Siddharth: Math, Edward: Math, Nikhil: Math and Science, Sanchit: Technology Hobbies/Sports: Siddharth: Video Gaming and Basketball, Edward: Sports and video games, Nikhil: soccer, badminton, coin-collecting, cricket, Sanchit: Play Guitar Hero III and play soccer Pet Peeve: Siddharth: Computer crashing, Edward: my little brother, Nikhil: my little sister, Sanchit: my video game crashing Pets: Siddharth: None, Edward: None, Nikhil: None, Sanchit: Dogs Siblings: Siddharth: little sister, Edward: little brother, Nikhil: little sister, Sanchit: little sister Other things you should know about me... Everyone: None

1. Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?)

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see// and //hear// and //experience// the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement?

Hailey HA . Think of plot—is it original? (If an adaptation, is it creative or interesting to you?)

2. Think about problems that the characters face. Are there complications that add enough suspense, tension, or interest? Is there a climax that satisfies you? Is the resolution satisfying? What could be added or changed?

3. Think of characterization—are the characters life-like? Are characters likable and enjoyable? Do we get a good sense of character from many of these: description, dialogue, narrator's opinion, discussion from other characters, the character’s own actions?

4. Think of imagery and details. Do they help you //see // and //hear // and //experience // the story?

5. What areas of the story need the most improvement?